“One Way Love” | StageMilk feedback

Feedback from my StageMilk submission this month – “One Way Love”.

Think about the beginning and the end of the scene. The actor speaks in a continuum, not in isolation. I need to think about how to enter and exit the scene, so I present it as a flow, rather than a cold start and cold stop. That will give it a better flow.

What am I doing before the scene starts? Where have I come from? Who am I speaking to and why?

Where am I going after the scene ends? Who will I speak to next?

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